Constructive Critisism

I'm hoping to get some peoples insights into my lyrics. I'm not going to give you a title, I'd prefer that you pick one yourself that stood out to you. It does not matter for me if it is a new one, an old one or a featured one. I will return the favour twofold, but only if the comments provide insight. If they are only one line, or if they only say how horrible or how terrific they are, I am not interested. If you provide insight of to why it is either one of those, or neither, for that matter, then I will return the favour.
To clarify, I'd like well thought out comments on any lyric, and it is a two for one deal. Thank you.

Peace and prosperity,

(RKD)