Comment for comment on a short poem please ? :)

  • Hollymariee
    15 years ago

    The X-Ray is only 8 lines long .. Please read and comment , and I'll return the favour . Yours doesn't have to be that short :) , just please praise my comments if they're helpful .

  • Italian Stallion
    15 years ago

    Done! Please do which ever seems to catch your attention.

    Thank you in advance, Joe

  • Hollymariee
    15 years ago

    Okaay , anyone else ?

  • Mask of Pain
    15 years ago

    Yes I commented You can pick the poem. I really don't mind witch one. But plz not my old ones. my newone are better.
    Love,Music, Poems,
    SafeInHisArms

  • Hollymariee
    15 years ago

    More please :) , I need feedback !

  • No Need For A Name
    15 years ago

    Very beautiful Well done.
    Could you please comment on my lyrics "Glass Masks" Thank You

    Peace and prosperity,

    (RKD)

  • mysterious
    15 years ago

    I just did...can u take a look at my latest one, runaway romance...it's not as short though....but tells a story in it as well..

    thanks...good work

  • ASPHYXIATED
    15 years ago

    Done. (:

    Please choose any of mine that catch your eye.

  • Hollymariee
    15 years ago

    Done :) , anymore ? & Please remember to vote !

  • Michael D Nalley
    15 years ago

    Please do "Sinning Sainted Cynic"

  • Faithless
    15 years ago

    Done.

    Golden Dome plz

    Thx in Advance;)

  • Hollymariee
    15 years ago

    Okaay . Awesome guys .. Thank you so much ! I'll take moree .