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Not Enough
16 years agoHY,
I just wrote 2 new poems, and I'd like some feedback on them. If you comment on either of them I'll comment on three of yours. I'll accept any one-liners or two-liners. You get waht you give though. Leave titles, or I pick from random. It may take me some time to reply because I have school.
Mine;
Follow The Leader (Depression)
Not Jealous, Just Mad (Lost love)
Thanks,
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Michael D Nalley
16 years agoPlease do my latest
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Hollymariee
16 years agoOkayy , would you please do The X Ray and any other two that catch your eye :) , thanks !
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Not Enough
16 years agoMicheals' are done, I'm just doing Hollymariees' now.
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Not Enough
16 years agoDone, anyone else?
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RobinAnn13
16 years agoI did it!!
I liked them both and I'll have to check out some of your other poems too.
Could you please check out:
Don't act like you know me
Always Waiting
You won't see me
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Not Enough
16 years agoDone excellent poems.
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No Need For A Name
16 years agoFinished. Could you please comment on my lyrics:
I Only Use My Superpowers for Good
Something Beautiful
Life Support
Thank you.
Peace and prosperity,
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Wake Me Up
16 years agoCan you do my lastest one
then what ever ones you choose -
anonymous lover
16 years agoI'm gonna comment yours now
please comment
"Stung by a scorpion"
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"A look can convey so much" -
anonymous lover
16 years agoOh..upps..and "Love is the only thesis"
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Not Enough
16 years agoI'll do them all when I wake up tomorrow, I've been really busy, and it's passed midnight sorry guys.
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anonymous lover
16 years agoNo problem..sleep well :)
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Not Enough
16 years ago=D
I'm doing "xXxemzxXx" now. GREAT POEMS!!!!!!!1111one
Soda E> -
Not Enough
16 years agoDone, anymore?
Soda E> -
FlawlesslyTarnished
16 years agoDone (:
- Unsought Lust
- A Discontented Heart
- Rejuvenated
thankyou(: -
Not Enough
16 years agoDOMENEMENEMENEMENE
Anymore? -
XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX
16 years agoPlease do my last 3
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Not Enough
16 years agoDone,
anymore?
And if you're going to comment one one of mine, I have aother new poem called "Butterflies" -
Not Enough
16 years agoDone, anyone else? If so... There's another 'new poem' I wrote called "Perfect Me" so now you have four choices of poems lol
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Not Enough
16 years agoDone, anymore?
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sweet escape
16 years agoI will read one...
the only one i really want done is OCD
u pick the other 2
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Not Enough
16 years agoDone, more???
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Sumit Ojha
16 years agoDone...
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Not Enough
16 years agoDone. Except " It happened one night" I already did yours. Anybody else??
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CanUKissAwayMyPain
16 years agoDone.
can you do
"Waiting In The shadows, Until The Sun Hits Me To Shine"
"I learn..To Love...But Trying To Forget"
n " In My World"
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Not Enough
16 years agoDone, anybody else?
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Not Enough
16 years agoDone anyone else? And "It happened one night" I'll try to get to it. =D
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Lonely Rider
16 years agoDone one of yours...
read your quotes... they are very nice.. -
Not Enough
16 years agoDone.
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Not Enough
16 years agoIf anyone wants to comment anymore, there's another one instead. It's not mine but it's really good and it deserves comments and feedback.
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1117096 -
Chocolate Addict
16 years agoDone urs Not Jealous, Just Mad
Plz comment on my poem
Enmity Felicity
Victim of Love
Deja Vu
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Not Enough
16 years agoDone. =D
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Not Enough
16 years agoDone.
