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I have written new lyrics "I Am Your Gun" Pleace comment and I will comment on any of your two.
Please no one liners
If you don't leave titles, I WILL NOT comment.
Thank you

Peace and prosperity,

(RKD)

Okey i will comment your right now..
please comment "Stung by a scorpion"..
I will tell you which other poem to comment after
I made comments for yours..

Can I give you the other poem in a week??
I'm working on one right now..but it's not really
finished yet!!

Sure

Done, can you do Slumber Still and The Maiden's Letter please?

I'll check out "I am your Gun"

I would dig you checking out my latest poem.
"Love Snare"

and perhaps,

"My chance"

Okey I'm still not finished but how about you comment "Moment of affinity"