In desperate need

Of feedback! Haven't been getting much, so I would really appreciate some in depth comments, if at all possible. I specifically want comments on my newest, but you're welcome to do any others as well. I will match what you've done. Thank you in advance. :)

I did onee . Please do the xray :) .

Done. Anyone else?

Okay, i will be in new york until monday, so anyone who comments me please PM me so ill receive your message right when i get on :)