New stuff after long hiatus

I've been a member here for a while, but my poetic muse seemed to have taken an extended vacation... I recently came across quite the inspiration and decided to write. The poem is called "You" and it's dedicated to the man I love. Please let me know what you think:

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1116937

422 visits and not a single comment or rating.. ? I'm a bit disappointed. Not to be pushy, but I'd really appreciate some critique on this or at least a comment from those who read it.

Sure thing, I will get right on it!

Yup i have time. i'll do it right now. =]

Very well written.. Also left a comment.