First new poem i've written in a while...

  • ABrookeD
    15 years ago

    It would be nice if i could get some feedback/suggestions. I had stopped writing for a while, but i'm getting back into it again. If you get the chance, please read it and let me know what you think.

  • Minkus
    15 years ago

    I read, commented (bigtime,) and enjoyed it. Good poem for your first one in a while.

  • The Prince
    15 years ago

    I realised I used the word 'vague' a lot of times the comment I left you - apologies for that. In need of a thesaurus haha. :)