Neeeeed feedback <3 .. Please ?

Name : Hollymariee
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Joined : Mar 31, 2007
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I wrote a new poem, called It wasn't him who picked up the pieces , and I really need feedback . I will return the favor with as much insight as you give me for two of your poems . Please give me other suggestions for the title as well .. Thanks in advance ! Holly Marie xoxo

- Name : The Prince
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The Prince
15 years ago

Get rid of those incomprehendible little symbols first haha

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- Name : Michael D Nalley
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Michael D Nalley
15 years ago

Maybe "romancers seldom pick up pieces"

Please do "The unforgiving"

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- Name : Hollymariee
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Hollymariee
15 years ago

Thanks guys :) . Anyone else ?

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- Name : Gizmo
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Gizmo
15 years ago

I've done it and it was brilliant. nominated and everyting xx

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- Name : Hollymariee
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Hollymariee
15 years ago

Okiieee , anyone else ? :)

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