Paper Wings 1-1

It's my newest poem. I know its not my best, but it's for a friend of mine, and I would like comments before I give it to her for graduation.

Please, no one liners.

Done. :)

Nothing in return; just trying to get back into commenting. :)

You sure you don't want a comment? I'm trying to better myself at commenting, and this is a great chance to do it.

Done plz rrc my latest

I heard that your a heartbreaker^^