GROUP POEM PROJECT (ADD SUBMISSIONS)

  • CinnamonTwirl
    19 years ago

    Hey y'all, my name's katrina

    I wanted to write a poem...So I started thinkin of all the reasons I write...so far I got

    "Secrets that I never speak, I write
    Depressed and my body is weak, I write

    Heartbreak and emotional despair, I write
    When next to noone cares, I write"

    After I started it really began to remind me of the Maya Angelou "still I rise" type stuff...but here is what I was thinkin!

    I wanted to add other peoples reason for why they write...write like poetry, diary, anything...and my doesnt have to be depressing reasons, it can be anyreason. I want to put them all together and post it.

    So: What do you think of the idea? SUBMIT A COUPLET! I would like it to follow the same form as mine. Ill see how this comes along to find out a date I should 'close the polls' or something like that. Its just an idea, let me know what you think.

    -Katrina

  • Kevin
    19 years ago

    "Questions that demand release, I write
    Subconscious bursts of insight, I write"

  • *~*Soldier Lover*~*
    19 years ago

    "a love so great, i write
    parental overkill, i write
    so my guy can know, i write
    so my thoughts can show, i write
    to let my feelings flow, i write"

    **i love writing. i write to express feelings**

  • CinnamonTwirl
    19 years ago

    thanks guys, these are great. I hope I can get a couple more

  • CinnamonTwirl
    19 years ago

    hey 'just plain me' you are makin a good point but its okay, im probably goin to give it just a few more days and compile what i have and give everyone their respective credit.

  • Bret Higgins
    19 years ago

    No empathy, I like. I write
    No faith, I strive. I write
    No desire, I revel. I write
    Good or bad, it's me. I WRITE.

  • Heather M Craig
    19 years ago

    Justplainme's right...why did only one person actually do a couplet...guys a couplet is 2 LINES of rhyme...eh umm how about try again!!

  • Bret Higgins
    19 years ago

    Well, I was feeling generous.

    Bert.

  • CinnamonTwirl
    19 years ago

    thanks again everyone, and now that i think about it its okay that the form wasnt followed because its from the heart. I will stop takin submissions on either wednesday the 9th or friday the 11th...not sure yet.

  • Tammy
    19 years ago

    When I am feeling blue I write
    when I am missing you I write

    When I am really down I write
    when words can't be found I write

    When I think of how you love me I write
    When life is all it can be I write

  • CinnamonTwirl
    19 years ago

    Tammy is officially one of my favorite people along wit just plain me, they followed the format that i had wanted exactly how I wanted! Not to go against anyone else but...yea...keep it up, I have decided that I will stop takin submissions on Friday early morning and put it together and post it on Friday Feb...11th I believe. Thanks!

  • jenn
    19 years ago

    When I feel like I wanna cry, I write
    When all you do is lie, I write.

    When the weight of the world is on my shoulders, I write.
    When I feel as if your heart couldnt be any colder, I write.

    When I couldnt be anymore pissed, I write.
    When My life is so full of bliss, I write

    When I feel my world is over, I write
    When my parents piss me off, I write

    When I fall in love with someone new, I write
    When all my thoughts are filled of you, I write

    Ok, I suck. But I thought I'd post anyways. lol.

  • StormyWeather
    19 years ago

    when my emotions fall free, i write
    when the words flow naturally, i write

    when i cry but you understand, i write
    when i die with you holding my hand, i write

    when i live with this passion and hate, i write
    when i give up and i'm too late, i write

    when you say that i'll always fail, i write
    But brave heart will always prevail, so i write

  • StormyWeather
    19 years ago

    i know i'm 2 late but i just wanted to write something!

  • katie!
    19 years ago

    When you laugh and put me down, I write
    When you add onto my face a frown, I write