Give me some reading material.

No catch. Tell me of a poem you want me to critique, and I will do my best.

Conditions:
1) If it's generic, or otherwise pointless, I won't bother.
2) You have to promise not to take offence if I have a real dig at it - it's nothing personal, I'm just rather picky.
3) You don't have to do anything back. Nobody ever does, I just want some good poetry to help with. Poetry with heart, is what I mean.
4) Nobody pretentious who likes to play around with x y and z to portray their innermost feelinsg to the masses with the beauty and grace of a flying swan. Get over yourselves.

Anyway, I'd like a link, if you don't mind, it's easier for me.

Of course you ARE more than welcome to praise it/comment back/keep in touch but it's not required at all, I'm just that bored and feel like brushing up my analytical skills. All these '1 for 3' comments are getting on my nerves.

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1118564

Please and thankyou. (:

It happened one night: I'm feeling lazy. Link me please?

And alright, I'll do that other one, then. *Gets to it*

Thanks muchly.

Asphyxiated: Done.

Thine eyne incliped fair anight
http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1118834

I also have a translated version of it posted...

Thank you in advance, Joe

Everybody's so far've been reviewed.

Yours made me feel sleepy, Joe.

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1118443

Please and thank you.

Done and done.

Uncherished Leftovers

thanks

Lonely rider do me a favour and post a link...

And erm, Vanilla, I'll do yours if you judge your competition. >:)

Http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1119320

Thanks!!

Heres two- you can choose what you'd prefer to read, if not both

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1118480

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1119090

thanks a ton

I'll do both at some point. :)

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1115572

Just to warn you, its a very long poem, if you don't feel like reading it, then just do another one please. Thank you so much, how kind of you!

Please do my lyrics "Don't Worry (I'm Okay to Drive) Thank you

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1119309

Peace and prosperity,

(RKD)

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1096999

Please and thank you :)

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1119445
Thanks a lot.

Http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1118585

Called "I'm Useless Without You"
Thank you so very much

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1115583

Thanks mate!

"Once" please and thank you.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1119275

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1119273

Haven't had any feedback on it yet. Can't decide if that's good or bad. ;) Give it to me straight.

Please tell me what you think of "Sweet Susan"

Look. I'm not going to go into your profile and rifle around looking for poems. I will say this one more time: no link, no comment.

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1119472

and i promis i wont get mad at the truth

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1119404

A Day in the Life of Cancer Boy, please. Thank you.

Feel free to do any of mine.

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1119186
wrote this awhile ago but no one comments :( so i have no idea how good it really is be as blunt and honest as you wish :)

The peripetions of love please.

Alright, anybody NOT reading my conditions is gonna get ignored.

Anyway I will get around ter doing them but I'm hella busy recently.

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=1111771

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=967550

and

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1109052

if you wouldnt mind

OK did a couple more - I will get around to everyone at some point.

I read your rules, btw I just figure you would rather choose one for yourself.

Alrighty. I'd prefer a link or two, though, please, it's just easier for me. (:

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1119532

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1119953

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/explicit/poems.php?explicit=1&id=1120221

Peace and prosperity,

(RKD)

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1120265

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=1120268

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1120381

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1120385

Please And Thanks.

That was quite the introduction to the thread.

Just this one, thank you!

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1120531

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