Controversial Comments 1:4

  • Spirit
    15 years ago

    I'm getting sick and tired of all the one linners that I've been getting as comments. For every one of mine that you do I will return the favor by commenting FOUR of your poems the same way. So here are the rules:

    RULES:
    1-Don't type anything along the lines of (It was such a good poem, I loved the rhyme/flow/blah blah blah)

    2-Don't lie to make me feel better. I'm a big girl I can haldle some criticism.

    3-Try your hardest to not mention anything to do with grammer, spelling, mechanics, wording, blah blah blah. (I don't believe that those things depleat a poet's talent.) But if you must mention it, use it sparingly.

    4-LEAVE ME TITLES OR ELSE I WON'T COMMENT YOUR POEMS!!!!!!!!!:)!!!!!!!!!!

    Yes I know that these rules may be difficult to follow, but that is the whole point of this forum. I didn't want to make it easy for you to leave me dumb one linners.

    Thank you
    :~)Spirit(~:

  • No Need For A Name
    15 years ago

    Finished. I did your poems "Sticks and Stones" and "Firefly" Could you please do my lyrics
    Sticks and Stones
    Firefly
    Off
    Don't Worry (I'm Okay to Drive)
    Loving You
    The Green Door
    Wide Awake Road and
    Poster Child
    Thank you

    Peace and prosperity,

    (RKD)

  • Michael D Nalley
    15 years ago

    Sweet Susan

  • Spirit
    15 years ago

    Hey I'm done with the ^ any one else

  • Esther
    15 years ago

    So I can't just say pick any of mine? Can I not?

    Free.
    This is the end.
    In the Darkness.
    Silent.

    Okay, thanks. Pick any of mine though, I don't mind.

  • Spirit
    15 years ago

    TEMPORARY CANCEL

    hey those above I'm busy with exams so don't worry I'll get to you soon.

  • Esther
    15 years ago

    Okay, thanks.

  • Spirit
    15 years ago

    It happened one night
    I've done your poems

    Esther I'm slowly working my way through your poems now

    for anybody waiting for this to re-open
    I'll let you know

  • Spirit
    15 years ago

    Esther, Vanilla.

    I finished your poems

    Everybody else

    This forum is now
    RE-OPEN

  • Cyber Saiyan
    15 years ago

    Done.

    I left comments on Let Me Out and Prophecy.

    Please comment on any of the following:

    A Short Poems Tale
    Rhetorical Emotions
    Anti Me
    Pale Red Circles
    Man Child
    Yours
    Mine
    Sex Drive

    Or pick any of poems if you prefer.

    Best wishes.

  • Spirit
    15 years ago

    HEY I'M REAL BUSY NOW SO ^ I'LL GET TO YOU AS SOON AS I CAN

  • Spirit
    15 years ago

    Did anybody get the message that this is now OPEN?????

  • Spirit
    15 years ago

    CLOSED

    Cyber Saiyan please P.M. me about how many of your Poems that I still need to do.

  • H E Losey
    15 years ago

    Well I have done my best on two of your writes, now to provide titles for you.....would prefer that you choose yourself as I did yours but.....
    Ecstasy
    A Clown
    In My Dreams
    Yesterday
    The Chameleons
    You Are
    sleep's image
    Staged
    Thank you for sharing your words.

  • Levi
    15 years ago

    I just read, commented and voted on Fire..

    If you're still up for it could you read and comment

    Sticks and Stones

    Adrift an Empty Breeze

    Between Sunset and Sunrise

    and

    Seeing the Sunrise

    Thanks

  • Spirit
    15 years ago

    CANCLED

    Those above I'll get to you as soon as I can, promise.