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I haven't written for so long!
I've just been recently writing and getting back to my old ways.
So if you could give me some feedback on my recent poems, maybe even a little vote:) I'll give you two of the same quality comments back
Thank you!

Bang Bang and More Than Enough thank you

Done.
Could you do:
Fallen Soldiers
and Inspiring.

Done

Can you comment

I'll dance on your grave at your funeral & Dance of the individualist

thanks :]

Just "A Book on a Shelf" please :)
Thank you.

How bout the two latest featured poems?
Forsaken in the night
only night of forgotten love,
thanks man

Done. (:

Unsought Lust and Falling Like A Domino
please and thankyou.

OK i will do it. But can you just do one of mine. It's " I tried to write you a love poem..." plz and thank you.

Hey guys thank you for commenting
I just got back from a long trip and will be doing these soon!

Can you read "Old men checking you out"? (Dumb name I know hahaha). You don't have to read any others because those are old ones.