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New member.. Want feedback. Comment and one of my poems and I'll comment 3 of yours.

Please send me links of poems you want commented, not titles

I commented on the last poem but one of your love poems says it no longer exists and the other won't let me post a comment.. Amazing writing however. Any other poems you want me to comment instead of the other two?

Done :)
My newest two, please. Or just my newest one if you don't have enough time.
Thank you!

Done..

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1120734

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1116452

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1086030

thankyouu. (:

Finished. Could you please comment on the following lyrics
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=640890
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=635887
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=632242
Thank you

Peace and prosperity,

(RKD)

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1121075

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=43986

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1119116

Done can u plz do these three

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1121051

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1121279

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1121277