Double Duty (: 1 for 2

Hello all, I've finally written something new, and would really love to hear your thoughts on it. (: Try to be at least somewhat in depth in your comments, and definitely be honest -- I'm here for critique.

I will return the favor two-fold. Please leave the titles or links to your pieces! Thanks in advance. =J

Let's get rollinggggggggggggg

I like your picture, haha. Anyway, I've done it. I only really want my newest one done, please :)

Thanks