Two for Two

I would appreciate if you would mind commenting and rating on my two poems. ( There's more, but I'm kind of shy putting them up.. >.< ) I will return the favor, just tell me which two you would like me to rate and comment. ^-^

I've commented them bith, when you get new ones let me know and I'll do them as well.
If you wouldn't ind would you do "Why I Sing" and "Absence Of Memory"
Thank you
Nik