Looking for Honesty

Looking for some honest comments on my 3 new poems. they're the 3 featured poems. I will RTF. :)
Hopeless Romantic

Sure. not a problem. and thanks for stopping by. :)

Done.. can you do two of mine and can one of them be "last night" thank you

I've returned the favor to those who posted on here. Please request on here for me to read and comment on yours. :) As my time is short, I come straight here and use this post to determine who I read from. I've posted another though if y'all wouldnt mind. :)
"Understanding"
(or any of my featured poems.)