Sad Love Poem Contest

This is a sad love poem contest. Your poem must be sad and well about love. It can't be too short but don't wright me a novel either. It must rhyme and be in by July 7th.

Prizes- 1st place- 3 comments and 3 ratings
2nd place- 2 comments and 2 ratings
3rd place- 1 comment and one rating

have fun and be creative!

Can it be old?

I erased this poem I posted because it wasn't new, sorry.

No it has to be new please.

To Your Cheating Hearts

When the winter starts to burn,
Have you found your knees?
While they dangle your aching heart,
Pleading, 'Cut me free.'

When the summer starts to freeze,
Have you lost control?
While the world is aching,
Only to be fallen in the darkest hole.

When the Autumn leaves are green,
Do you feel the greed?
Have you seen it all?
While you cut and feed.

When the Spring is dying,
Has your flower been broken,
By the selfless pig?
While it remains unspoken.

You wouldn't feel the love,
You wouldn't feel the hate.
You wouldn't feel my pain,
As I slowly suffocate.

Being winded with steel,
Being torn to shreds,
Being burnt at the stake,
And an ocean is shed.

This is for the ugly ones,
Who pull mankind apart.
This is for unspoken pain,
Caused by cheating hearts.

Haven written in a while, I'm a bit rusty. :P

Okey dokey, I'll try and get something new in in the next few days =)

Sounds fun...I'll try ^.^

~Rachael~

Acquaintance made through common friend;
seat occupied in that friend's stead;
unwritten rules that flex and bend,
became brittle with the go ahead.

Unaware of what was to impend,
impaired, the duos' morals fled.
An act ensued that few commend;
affection thrived with little said.

Fortunately, they'd transcend
a love affair begun in bed.
Made a pact to start a trend,
to compromise and forge ahead.

Tightly knit, no need to mend,
a relationship of flawless thread.
Unblemished, left without loose ends;
woven, so as not to shred.

~Sean Dohr~

Sonnet: Who cares?
by Biya

Who knows the reason
When someone wants to be alone

Who cares for the one
Who has been rewarded pains to be drown

No one tries to understand those
Who laugh with hidden tears like a clown

Who thinks about the one
Like air, whose rare happiness have been blown

No one feels about the one
Who has been hurt like a stone

Who looks into one's life
Who never asks for help even in silent tone

Who acknowledges for those
Who without breaking ice pass into another zone

Alright I'll figure out the winner and then post them on here tomorrow. Good job everyone! :)

Bottle in One Hand

Bottle in one hand
Gun in the other
I empty my mind
In the most messy way possible

Every word in the lyrics
Of every song on this tape
Remind me of where I was
And how I wished I could stay

So I inhale these vapours
Sweet relief take my west
I put the barrel in my mouth
Blow my brains out my head

*I moved away from my girlfriend in california... That's the love to the sadness.*

1st place goes to Wings of Flames with To Your Cheating Hearts, 2nd goes to Dead People Don't Die with Bottle In One Hand, and 3rd goes to Sean Dohr with ~Rachael~. Thanks to all those that participated and congratulations to those who won.

I'll finish the prizes latest tomorrow. Thanks again! :)