Swallow Your Heart. [1 for 1]

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    I would love comments on my newest piece,
    'Swallow Your Heart'
    I'm looking for really good comments please.
    No one liners.
    Ill return the favor.

    Thanks :]

  • Hollow Emotion
    15 years ago

    Done, nice job!!!

    Could you please do "The Window of Distress"

    Please and thanks!

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    Done.. great write. :]

    Keep them coming, I will try and return favors asap.

  • Ray Smallshaw
    15 years ago

    Thanks I thoroughly enjoyed you poem read and comment on any one of my newly written poems that have not got any comments cheers Ray S

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    I did 'The Power and Glory'
    - - Great work :]

    Keep them coming .. anyone else?

  • The Queen
    15 years ago

    Done..;)

    Could you please do my newest " Boredom is a Disease"...

    Thanks ahead of time..

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    I will do this later today or tomorrow!
    Anyone else?

  • Kaila
    15 years ago

    I'll do it
    please do
    wild rides and hopeless kisses

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    Miren youre done! :]

  • IMMORTAL PAIN
    15 years ago

    Doin it right now. Can u do mine its called "miserable"

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    Kaila youre done.

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    Romeo Cries youre done as well.

    Anyone else?

  • Michael D Nalley
    15 years ago

    Could you do my latest post "Letter to the Laureates"

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    Done.
    Anymore?

  • GoodMorning
    15 years ago

    Donee! (: Very nice work.
    It isn't the best of comments, sorry,
    I'm far from an expert. :P

    Could you please do Sugar Ration?

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    Done.
    :]

    Anyone else?

  • Mezmeryz
    15 years ago

    Doing yours now..please do..my latest..thanks in advance!

    MEZi x

  • Mezmeryz
    15 years ago

    Hi, I've done it. its a great write!
    please r/r/c my latest...
    Thanks!
    MEZi x

  • x.Athame.x
    15 years ago

    I r/r/c. :)
    Good read.
    I'd appreciate it if you could do the same for my poem "Needles"

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    Mezmeryz youre done.

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    X.Athame.x youre done.

    Last call..
    anyone else?