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  • Hallo A Lilium
    15 years ago

    Hello there fellow poets.
    And also a hello to all the gals.
    I have written a new poem.
    It mean's a great deal to me.
    I'd definitely return the favor.

    I've learned some valuable things.
    Hopefully my poem makes you smile.
    I don't mind short comments or just one words.
    I just would like to know how it makes you feel.

    Life may give you lemons;
    I say make a pitcher of lemonade and give it away just to be nice.

    The poem is titled (The Chance Of Life)
    :D

    -Lilium.

  • Lady Nik
    15 years ago

    Done ^.^

    Twisted

    Please and thank you
    Nik

  • kate
    15 years ago

    Sure ill do it :]
    and any one of my poems thanks.

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    Done.
    'Trapped' please.
    :]

  • Mezmeryz
    15 years ago

    Hi huni b, your poem is really beautifuly writtten, thanks for somehow making me read it =]

    Can you please r/r/c:
    Beyond a Moment

    Thank you!

    MEZi x

  • Hallo A Lilium
    15 years ago

    Done! :) All were beautiful pieces. I enjoyed the reads immensely. Keep writing. And thank you for the comments! I appreciate them greatly.