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  • Hallo A Lilium
    15 years ago

    I have again written another poem That I'd like to have some feedback on.
    I am very open to any type of comment.
    Just be sure to tell me what you feel about the piece.
    I like hearing other's views on specific subjects.
    I will comment on two or more of your's depending on how well you explain your opinion.
    The poem is titled (Saved By God)
    That actually is its prolific name.
    I'd appreciate some comment's.
    :)

    " Live life gloriously because beauty shines through the heart and mind and soul."

    -Lilium

  • Gasttlee
    15 years ago

    I really enjoyed that piece. If nothing else, I would like some feedback on "I Wish" and "Take My Hand".

  • Obscura
    15 years ago

    Done

    could you do Dead Inspiration please?

  • Hallo A Lilium
    15 years ago

    Done. Each of the pieces were beautifully written.
    I stand to applaud both of you. Bravissimo. Stupendas.
    :D
    Thank you for the comments I received. I appreciate them very much.

  • Levi
    15 years ago

    Hey rated and commented your piece..

    If you could return the favour by reading either:

    -Sticks and Stones

    -Adrift an Empty Breeze

    -Between Sunset and Sunrise

    Thanks

  • Hallo A Lilium
    15 years ago

    Done Levi. They were beautiful. If you ever need to talk I'll always have two listening ears and I am an advise column all on my own.

  • Lauren
    15 years ago

    Really awesome job, I loved that poem!!!!

    If you could please do "Bleeding Scar" that would be awesome.