Picture Prompt #2

  • Poet on the Piano
    15 years ago

    Hello all! This is my second contest for picture promts, and I will be doing a series of these. I would like you all to write a poem about the picture below.
    This is a fantasy picture and a beautiful one, so have fun!

    http://th04.deviantart.net/fs9/300W/f/2006/342/8/2/Winter_fantasy_by_Ironshod.jpg

    RULES:

    Can be old or new.
    Can be short or long.
    It can be in any form, as long as you explain it.
    Has to be associated with the picture.
    No need to reserve.

    DEADLINE:

    August 9th.

    PRIZES:

    First place- 5 in-depth comments

    I will change the deadline if needed but this is going to be a quick contest and I will probably host one every week or two on a new picture.

    Everyone who enters will receive one comment on a poem of their choice.

  • Jad
    15 years ago

    I'll try to do this.

  • Poet on the Piano
    15 years ago

    Thank you Jad.

    I don't know why its not working, I tried it and it worked.

    Then go to goggle images and type in "fantasy". Its on the second page, the fourth one going across.

  • Italian Stallion
    15 years ago

    Wishing On A Star (Song)
    by Italian Stallion

    Here I am all alone,
    Wishing on a star.
    When everyone comes home,
    It's me on my own.
    City lights now glowing,
    From vibrant red to green.
    Snow gently falling,
    A wonderful sight to see.

    When Christmas comes to town,
    You'll hear a joyful sound.
    Children run and play,
    How I'd wish they stay.
    Music playing loud,
    With families all around.
    It's hard to be alone,
    With all this Christmas cheer.

    Letters to Santa,
    Children always write.
    Hopping for the best toys
    To come overnight.
    What a thrill it must be on the night of Christmas Eve
    Knowing Santa's on his way.

    Waking up early,
    Running to the tree.
    Great anticipation,
    I can't wait to see.
    The family gathers round
    Happy as can be.
    That's all I want when Christmas comes to town.

    © Copyright 2008 By: Italian Stallion

  • Poet on the Piano
    15 years ago

    Beautiful poem Joe, thanks for submitting!

    This contest is still open!

  • Angel Tears
    15 years ago

    Snow of July

    Tracing my fingers in the snow
    Looking up into the night sky
    Watching the stars aglow
    Shivering in the cold of July

    Ironic how you said you'd never leave
    Not until the ground froze in the summer heat
    Ironic still that I always believed
    Yet I sit here, my very being incomplete

    Your passing struck a chord in me
    A song that brings tears to my eyes
    And when we scattered your ashes into the sea
    I still could not speak the word "goodbye"

    As I reach toward the sky, I grasp only air
    Hoping for stars, but meeting only the wind
    As I sink into the deepest pit of despair
    I sit here wishing for it all to end

    As I whisper the words I refuse to say
    My tears freeze to my face as I reminisce
    A life that faded into the grave
    I allow myself to fall into the abyss

    Goodbye, my best friend
    I will no longer pretend that you are here
    Goodbye, my cousin
    I will no longer hope for you to reappear
    Goodbye, snow of July, goodbye

  • Jad
    15 years ago

    Found You(Triolet)

    I have finally found you;
    The lost star from long ago.
    Look hasn't my dragon grew.
    I have finally found you.
    Through snow and the blizzards that blew,
    And this star is what I have to show.
    I have finally found you;
    The lost star from long ago.

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    Triolet

    A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital letters representing the repeated lines.

  • Poet on the Piano
    15 years ago

    Thank you both, what beautiful work!

    Two more days!

  • Poet on the Piano
    15 years ago

    One more day 'til this contest ends! I will judge this contest Sunday night so please keep the entries coming!

  • Poet on the Piano
    15 years ago

    Contest is closed!

    Thanks for all the entries, winners will be posted shortly..

  • Poet on the Piano
    15 years ago

    And thanks for the wait, here is the winner:

    Italion Stallion, I really felt like yours was the most relevant to the picture and described the scenery, striking the reader. Congrats!

    Please pm me the five poems you wish to be commented on.

    The other two, thanks for entering, please pm me the title you would like commented.

    Thanks all for entering, I know this was a tiny contest but I hope to get more poets in next time.

    ~MaryAnne

  • Italian Stallion
    15 years ago

    Oh Thank you :] Please do any that catch your eye. Thanks again.

  • Jad
    15 years ago

    Thank you and congratulations Joe!!!

  • Poet on the Piano
    15 years ago

    All comments are done except I still have to get a message from Angel Tears.

    Thanks to all and tune in soon for a new picture prompt contest!

    EDIT:

    All comments are done, thanks for entering!
    I will post a new contest today, Picture Prompt #3