Yo people, need someone good with wit and english lingo

Ok so I’m doing a little treat for a friend

It’s a bunch of cakes in the arrangement of a puzzle. So they have to put the cakes in order, when they do, it spells out a message.

So the person knows this, I created a little note for when it will be given – The aim is to have a rhyme, be a bit of a riddle format, be a bit funny and also a bit cute

She has really nice eyes and a nice irish accent, don’t know if this can be worked into it

This is what I got

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Before you dive in and get
carried away,
You must first solve this puzzle and see
What I say!!!

The words will be clear
the further you read,
The numbers will help find the order
you need!!!

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Can anyone improve on this?

Much thanks kiddo’s

Add, if at first you dont succeed, to hell with it, LET EAT!!