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  • Kaila
    15 years ago

    I have two new poems out
    I'd appreciate comments on both
    but just one is fine too:)
    it's a 1-1 soo...
    thanks!

  • stormingdance (Lessa)
    15 years ago

    I've read/commented/rated your poem "Clouded".

    Just to let you know, I made a little typo near the end: "thought" should have been "that."

    You can comment on any poem you want. =]

  • Christina
    15 years ago

    Ok ill read both :]...please read my latest poem.

  • Hollow Emotion
    15 years ago

    I did clouded, very nice!!

    could you please do

    Use to

    thanks

  • mckenzie
    15 years ago

    The storm within is a perfect description of love. Could you check out 'for shal - a perfect song' thank you.