Hi. I'm Laila

Hi. I'm new and I would really appretiate it if you guys could comment on my poems. Tell me what you think and what you think I should change. I do take your opinions seriously. I have a few poems so you can comment on any but "Who I Am" is the one I really want ya'll to read. Thanks a lot!

It was a nice pome Laila.
I really enjoyed the rhythm and the sense of individuality.
I was wondering could you read my poem Doppleganger, it's my most recent one.
Thanks in advance.

If not, thanks anyway.