Please Review.

I wrote Two poems I am very proud of, and I'm usually shy about poetry. But i think these two are my best and i would really like some feedback. I can't promise i'll return the favour i dont come on this site much but i'll Be sure to Try if you do.

"She'll never know" and "scared. very Scared"

Much love. Thank you very much

P.s
Bob Shank, I would love to here what you think