Forced rhymes?

I'm working on a poem called my gothic lover.I like this poem alot but i'm not sure if i'm forcing the rhymes too much.i'm looking through all my old poem's and i can see a pattern of me forcing ryhmes into the poem's completely destroying any structure and any chance of the poem being any good. And i was just wondering if someone would be kind enough to review it to see if i'm making this fatal poetry error in that specific poem or not.And if i am how do i break the pattern so i won't continue doing this? thank's for reading this and i look forward to seeing what all you awesome poet's have to say.

~Cory~

Hmmm i see most of these thread's just have the OP and no replies.So i hearby condemn this thread to the pit of doom with all the other's!! haha j/k.. anyway's guess i'll just have to figure it out myself. If anyone does ever read this though and has some advice for me i'll be all ear's, thank's again ;)

~Cory~