Comments? Criticism?

Hello =)

I'm asking for my new poem, Definitely, Maybe, to be read and critiqued. Anybody willing to do so? I always return comments.

Done. If you could please do this poem in return it would be greatly appreciated.

Love's What We Became (Song)
http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1038337

If you've commented on it before, just pick something else that grabs your attention.

Thank you in advance, Joe

Haha, didn't realize you had asked me to do this poem. I left a comment on another one, but I'll do this one too, I love reading your work. =)