Postmodern Love Poem Contest

Write me a postmodern love poem.

But:
- It can't have the word "love" anywhere in it. No exceptions.
- You must mention rain and/or the moon.

- Any form, length, whatever else. I do not advise you write something too short, though.
- Can fit under any category, as long as it has to do with love. For example: it can be explicit, nature-related, sad.

I'm looking for originality. Hit me with something postmodern (google it, if you don't know).

This is pretty easy, don't be put off by the word "postmodern", I basically don't want a poem that's like the rest of the love poems out there.

An example: http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1114022

The aim of this contest is to promote a new way of thinking.

Awards:
First place = nomination and three comments.
Honourable mentions = two comments.

Poems due: 25th September.

PM me with any questions/concerns.
Have fun!

Title: The Cloud And The Angel
By: Lilium

Softly it rains and dampens the night,
an angel sit's on a cloud winded from her flight.
She pokes the cloud awakening it from it's sleep,
It's smiles drowsily at her and starts to weep.

Such sad eyes within a weary beautiful gem,
the cloud cries sullenly both outwardly and within.
The angel smiles delicately and hugs the cloud tight,
promising that everything will be alright.

The cloud wipes its eyes and looks up at her,
he sees something amazing with nothing to blur.
Such a magnificent creature that hes quite taken by,
while shes humming to him a sweet heartening lullaby.

He grins at her liveliness and feel's something spark anew,
It's something he knows is brilliant so true.
A cloud and an angel sit together under the moon as one,
Creatures so alike, a relationship that's just begun.

When Heaven Sank to Hell

When Heaven sank to Hell
And darkness swallowed the light
He felt he'd reached the end
He feared he'd lost the fight

Forever the Darkest Angel
The title he couldn't dispose
He was drowning in his past
Where no one else could know

This Angel that felt so lost
Seems to have been found
A dove appeared from amidst the rain
And turned his heart upside-down

His feelings for her were strong
Quite unknown to her
The time they spent together
Caused butterflies to stir

And now she's reading these words
Learning the feelings I speak of
For I am the Dark Angel
And she, she is my dove

I'm putting my heart into her hands
She tripped me and thus I fell
This mesmerizing dove saved me
When Heaven sank to Hell

Thanks guys!
Keep them coming :)

Blind and Hazy
by dollwithafrown

I sat beneath the willow tree and smiled to the air;
the rain, it filled my yellow cup and told me you were there,
and I held onto our branches, the ones that held our name,
and told the leaves that I'm okay, that you were not to blame.

And I laughed and I cried and I smiled and danced;
upon the moon rising, I gave it a chance,
and it crashed and it burned and it tore at my heart:
swimming in secrets that can't bear to part,
and I'm blind and I'm hazy, my eyes cannot see -
without you as my guidance, my future's not free.

I paid for this life, like I paid for the booze
that lined our carpet, next to your sweaty shoes,
and I remembered the tales, upon which we took a chance
and I laughed and I cried and I smiled and danced.

And I'm blind and I'm hazy, my eyes cannot see -
I'm begging and pleading, but my future's not free,
and it crashed and it burned and it tore at my heart
your silky skin and cedar eyes, I cannot bear to part.

Maybe you were broken;
maybe your sky got black;
but I once had a broken doll,
and once fixed, she came back.

I am not sure if this qualifies as it not only deals with the love of one person but anyway.

The songs of light and darkness

Part 1

Descent into darkness

I stand alone
As I cry
Beneath these careless Stars of night
Without a hope within my mind
I merely await the suns first light
The hated herald
Of the sad day to come
When I shall leave them all behind
To run so very far away
But now
There is nothing left for me to do
There are no magic wordsLeft
For me to say
I can but cry my sorrow
Unto the silent moon
How could this all have gone
So terribly astray

All night
I had watched the pieces weave together
To summon the dawn
Of this tragic day
I had held my breath
For what had felt forever
Knowing that merely
These Brief hours remain
But still those hours
Had flown into the never
As the final moment came
Knocking
Calling my name
And as a dark nightmare
Within a terrible fever
All was so unreal
As those I loved
bid farewell
and turned
To go on their way
But In the end
Was still the greatest sorrow
For she was the last
By my side to remain
Our time together
Had been so brief
Though there was no-one
Except myself to blame
For all these words
I would leave unsaid
All these feelings
I would never explain
And then all too quickly
That dead moment came
When I released her
From my last embrace
And looked deep Within her eyes
dark and beautiful
I so nearly broke
I so nearly cried
Though somehow
I merely whispered
My final goodbye
And as I turned
To walk away
These silent tears
I began to cry
For something precious
I had left behind
For now I am naked
Without a soul
And through my tears
I heard her whisper
" I know"

Then
as the evening wind moaned
through the trees
I heard the ghosts of the lost
Whisper my fate to me
"Go north my child
Unto the land
where winter never ends
Where no angel
Will ever dare tread
There you will find
Your throne of bereavement
There you will find
Your crown of the dead"

Times up!!!!

Conest closed.

I'll come back to this within the next 24 hours.

Sorry if this is a little late.

I have a couple of comments to make. You guys need to proof read and punctuate your work propperly, it makes a difference. I liked the imagery in all poems though, so kudos.

WINNER....
Blind and Hazy by dollwithafrown
Everything about this was amazing. The imagery and the descriptions. Exactly what I was looking for and now I want to go and read more of your work.
I'll PM you asking what titles you want me to comment, etc.

There are no honourable mentions because only four people entered and I'd feel bad giving them out because it means leaving one or two people out.

Thanks for entering guys!

Thank you so, so much for choosing my poem as the winner. It means a lot. :) I'm really glad to hear you enjoyed it.

I'll reply to your PM just now. <3