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If anyone wants to review one of my poems in " the songs of darkness and light" series i will return the favour three fold

the three poems are all based on reality and events that happened but i have thrown in quite a bit of mysticism
( a doctrine of an immediate spiritual intuition of truths believed to transcend ordinary understanding) . the poems follow my thoughts and feelings from the day i left home, to live abroad. the style i write in is a bit unnusual and people have told me i break my sentances up un-necessarily but i do that because my poems are meant to be read aloud. and i break sentences into 2 or 3 to show where i mean to emphasize the last letters in a word, or to take a half break

Done... well penned :)

my lastest three please :)

Ok done. sorry it took so long but i my computer went on the fritz and i could only log on at my friends. but i have sorted it now.
anyone else?

and if you dont like my poem. simply say so and why. dont wory i wont be vindictive in return

There links are
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1130623

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1131868

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1132021

ps if you do 2 or 3 i will only double the contents instead.
ie i will do 4 or 6 of yours