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  • Hollow Emotion
    15 years ago

    If you could read my latest "told too much" i will return the favor for 2 of yours. I will also do 2-4 3-6...

    if you decide to do multiples, you can choose the rest!

    please and thanks

  • Hollow Emotion
    15 years ago

    Oh, and if i dont get back to you right away, dont worry, i will!

  • AngelicDecadence
    15 years ago

    Kay. Done. I did "Used to" "Five Senses of Death" and "Told too much".
    I messed up on one of them and accidentally sent it before I was done critiquing, so if you could delete that first one for me, I'd appreciate it lol.

    Could you please do "Dear Diary Pt. 2 (Guy's P.O.V.)"
    "Dear Diary Pt. 1"
    "Title of Player"
    "Mistakes"
    "My Guardian Angel"
    "Glass Shards"
    Please and thank you. (:

  • Hollow Emotion
    15 years ago

    Alright that sounds great!!

  • Brenda
    15 years ago

    Done :]
    it'd be great if you could read my latest two! please and thank you!

    & have a great dayyy.

  • Hollow Emotion
    15 years ago

    Ok... i will try to do all the poems tomorrow when I have time , im at work right now and i cant really do them here, thanks for the comments! :-)

  • Steady Stereotype
    15 years ago

    Done~

    Please do my featured poem as well as my latest.
    "No False Pretense" && "Push [Past] The Edge"

  • Second to None
    15 years ago

    Please do:

    End (suicide note)

    and

    Mask

  • Hollow Emotion
    15 years ago

    Even angels cry, i have one more to do for you, sorry i have to get off the computer, for the rest of you, i will try and do them tomorrow!

    sorry i wish i had more time to do them tonight!

  • Ray Smallshaw
    15 years ago

    Full of sadness yet I read two of your thought provoking poems and commented. I never direct people to read my poetry but there are a number of my featured poems with no comment so if you fancy a look please do any comments would be appreciated Ray S

  • Broken Masquerade
    15 years ago

    Done :)
    It was great!
    Could you please do Her Prison and Shattered Mirror.
    Thanks heaps :)

  • Michael D Nalley
    15 years ago

    Please do Colors of the Rainbow

  • Jacqui Armstrong
    15 years ago

    That was an amazing poem well done =)

    could you please do "three years on" and any other one of your choice?

    thanks in advance!

    Jacs
    xxxx

  • BitterXSweetness
    15 years ago

    I'll comment and vote but I want 2 know, what is ur stopping point when it comes 2 poems r? Like R u willing 2 comment on cutting poems? And suicide poems? Some ppl r very touchy about those type of subjects. R u ok w/ voting and commenting on that?

  • Hollow Emotion
    15 years ago

    Wow, for some reason my computer was acting weird lately... i will get to all of your poems as soon as i can!!

  • Hollow Emotion
    15 years ago

    Black rose, i will comment on any poem!

  • HvN
    15 years ago

    I commented and voted on both "teen terror" and

    "told too much" if you can, would you kindly do my featured poems please ?

    thanks! :)

  • Hollow Emotion
    15 years ago

    All done, nice job to all... they were really well written!!

    Anymore???

  • Hollow Emotion
    15 years ago

    Woo hoo, new poem... called Hopes and Dreams... same rules apply... 1-2 2-4 3-6... etc... will read anything!

  • Lonely Rider
    15 years ago

    Done. My latests please

  • Hollymariee
    15 years ago

    Okaay , please read Picture Perfect & anything else please :)

  • Hollow Emotion
    15 years ago

    Both done... excellent jobs to both of you!!

    anyone else?

  • Hollymariee
    15 years ago

    Okay , please do picture perfect and anything else that catches your eyes . Thank you <3 !

  • Steven Topaz
    15 years ago

    Sick pt 1 and 2. you should enjoy the comment i try to give good depth and critiscim thats what the comments are for.

  • xXxemzxXx
    15 years ago

    Anything that catches your eye i did, told too much, teen terror and used to... from the poems i read i can easily say you are a great writer :)

  • MERCY is never shown
    15 years ago

    Please do any of my featured thank you

  • Hollow Emotion
    15 years ago

    I'm sorry it took so long to get back here, been kinda busy.... i will do some of the poems today, i'll try to do all of them by the end of the week

  • Ray Smallshaw
    15 years ago

    Most enjoyable poem edit it with the suggestions in the comments. Any of my featured poems would be appreciated Ray S

  • Ken
    15 years ago

    It would be great if you could read some of my poems...dose not matter which just want some votes and comments to become a better writer.