Harsh critique wanted. 1:1

I want to start writing again and this is always one way that works.
please comment on any of my poems, and i will return the favour. 1:1 2:2

please, no requests for sappy/explicit/really long poems. anything else is okay.

Done, wonderful job. if you could do my new one. Im here it would be appreiciated
thanx

suicidalkansas

Done.

one of the 2 latest poems would be great? Thanks!!

I have read you last three latest poems and enjoyed them very much read my comments and if you can find the time I have recently written in the discussion forum about wanting my featured poems read please
take your pick Ray S

Muse-less

Please and thank you

Nik