Do you think she'll like this?

  • Kaitlin Kristina
    19 years ago

    Its very sweet.

    The flow on the last line is a little off. Maybe if you switched the words it would flow better:

    I hope you feel the same way,
    It's love, I feel like this,
    So if you feel the same way,
    Then give me just one kiss.

    Or A kiss, but reverse the "just" and the "a."

    It sounds better, but maybe thats only my ear and no one elses lol. Your sweet, and your girlfriend will adore it.

  • DeludedHonesty
    19 years ago

    I'm sure she'll just love it (or since you have probably already given it to her she did love it). Good luck, sorry it's a little late.

    ~*~Jessica~*~