Pick A Poem; please.

  • dollwithafrown
    14 years ago

    Hiii. :]

    Recently I've written four new poems:

    Driving Home and Dreaming of Christmas
    Tainted
    The Special Two
    The Man and the Boy on the Moon

    If you could please choose ONE of these poems to read and comment, then I will return the favour on TWO of yours. Pick any poem, whatever takes your fancy. And PLEASE leave titles for me to return the favour + 1 on. :)

  • Broken Masquerade
    14 years ago

    Done :)
    i did two because the first was so good :D
    you are so talented.
    could you please do whatever two stick out to you :)
    thanks heaps

  • dollwithafrown
    14 years ago

    Thank you for the comments. :) I commented two of yours.

    Who's up next?

  • Freedom
    14 years ago

    I did :) please RRC Departure

  • Rocky
    14 years ago

    Ok done. could you please do "a single tear stain upon an empty page" first and the "a vision within the flames"
    and please honest comments. i am not looking for a thesis on them but i do want to know how you trully feel about them.

  • Lady Nik
    14 years ago

    Any that you like are fine

    Please and thank you

    Nik :)

  • dollwithafrown
    14 years ago

    Thank you for the comments, guys. :) Really sorry I haven't got round to returning the favour yet. I haven't stopped since coming home for the holidays, but tonight I should have some free time so they will definitely get done then.