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  • Rocky
    14 years ago

    I still need to edit my poem " a single tear stain, upon an empty page " so i am looking for some honest and thoughtfull comments. if you hate the poem i want you to say so and why.

    i have grown sick of how most people on this site give a positive but empty comment so that the other person will do the same to there poems. it just seems futile to me. so i want to know how my poem trully made you feel. and i will return the favour inkind. my poem is a bit long so i will comment on a few of yours that you want me to. i will let you decide how many you feel it would be fair for me to comment on.