What you do for me, I will do for you

I have added three new poems, and I would like to know what you think of them. However many you read/critique of mine, I will do the same for you. Depending on your work, if I enjoy it enough I might read a bunch and leave comments. I am more curious as to what you think of the newest, called "In the act of violence". So if you're only planning on reading one of them, please read that one. I know I am not the best writer, but I am always up for improvements. These words aren't usually thought out over time, it is whatever happens to come to my mind, though they are not false feelings.

Please do my latest three

Wow have to say I am inspired by your work it's good xxx