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Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1144851

That's the one I'd like critiqued.

If you want a specific poem critiqued, let me know. Or else I will just pick a random one.

I'm not on the site a lot, so if I don't do it within a day or 2, don't get worried, I promise I will. Just give me a little time. =]

Thanks for reading, and have a great day.

Done really insightful

please do whichever you want to please and thank you :)

Done. =]

Would love more people to do this =]

Interesting write.

You can pick any of the 3 newest ones you wish to comment on, though "This sea is mine" is a personal favorite.