New poem!!

Please please please...I have a new poem I just posted I'd really like to hear what people think, so comment and/or rating would be awesome! :D I have another one that I'll post too but its a short one I made the other day so if you'd like to look at that one too that would be great! thanks!!

called....
A Tempered Heart
and... i haven't titled the other one yet

thanks again!