I have a challenge......do u choose to accept?

  • Shar
    14 years ago

    Write a poem of a souls journey from earth, to heaven (but not actually reaching heaven yet)

  • Seronum
    14 years ago

    Sounds like a good idea but also a tough request for me to accomplish.
    i will try this in a bit and let you know let me ad you

  • Mello193
    14 years ago

    I too will try this...ive written quite a few like that as well, and ill do it once more

  • Jessie
    14 years ago

    Becoming an Angel

    I'm not sure what to make of here,
    My eyes are open and my thoughts are cold
    I see what I know,
    It's foggy
    Unfamiliar

    I'm trying to recall what happened last,
    Not much is coming to my mind,
    Why can't I remember
    It's blurry,
    Unsettling

    Wander further, this is my house
    but it's not my home
    family photos gone
    shadows cast
    Unrecognizable

    Remembering lights, a scream
    why can't I recollect more
    I want to understand
    It may help
    Unamused

    I'm seeing people I know,
    talking, trying to get attention
    screaming, crying
    just listen
    Unanswered

    Squealing of tires, its coming back
    the smell of rubber, feel of glass
    I remember now,
    I'm dead
    Unbelievable

    Running farther, faster, flying
    tear stricken reflection
    in the mirror
    non-existent
    Unfair

    Allow everlasting peace to form
    breathe new air, serenity
    acceptance is key
    It's my time
    Unleashed

    Soaring through the skies, fog gone
    family's mourning, but time heals
    I know they'll be O.K
    so will I
    Unafraid

  • DeafBeats
    13 years ago

    When is the deadline?