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  • Shinobi
    14 years ago

    Back after a while away, and active again.

    I have written some new poems, around 8 in the last 3 months, and I'd like to receive some opinions about them.
    Some rules:
    1. Please no one liners, these doesn't count.
    2. I welcome honest opinions of all sorts.
    3. Do as many as you'd like, and I'll double the favor.
    4. Be specific with the poems you commented, and the poems you want me to comment. Links would be helpful as well.

    Thanks and have a pleasant read :)

  • Shinobi
    14 years ago

    Done! Thanks for the quick comments.

    Anyone else?

  • PlasticSmile
    14 years ago

    "They Say"
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1148071

    Thanks in advance :)

  • Shinobi
    14 years ago

    Done! Anyone else?

  • Danielle
    14 years ago

    I did Red Crimson Stain (I believe that was the name of it lol)

    Please do:

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1148161

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1147963

  • Shinobi
    14 years ago

    Done! Anyone else?

  • Ray Smallshaw
    14 years ago

    Read two of your excellent poem and commented. as you write poetry gives the relief valve many of us need to release feelings we can not or will not share with those we should or when we should stand at an open window and yell them to passers by. I did read most of your poems and I will certainly be looking for your new ones from now on. Ray S

  • Shinobi
    14 years ago

    A bit late, but I'm done!

    Awaiting more comments.

  • Lady Nik
    14 years ago

    I read "Crimson Red Stain" and "Unforgiven Sin"

    Can you please do

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1148531

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1148458

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1146112

    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1144895

    Please and thank you :]

    -Nik

  • Shinobi
    14 years ago

    Done! Anyone else?

    Anyone who comments "Forever Sore" shall receive 3 poems commented on back.
    This only inclined for helpful comments, no one liners or simple "I liked it" Shall be accepted.

  • Minkus
    14 years ago

    I did "Forever Sore" and "My Wife". The poems I'd like comments on are:

    1. "Falsehood" http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=1081374

    2. "A Lie and the Truth" http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/special/poems.php?id=464057

    3. "Day by Day" http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1147096

    4. "Nocturne" http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=1147083

    Thanks in advance.

  • Shinobi
    14 years ago

    Done! Thank you all for your comments :)
    Anyone else?

  • Shinobi
    14 years ago

    Thank you all for commenting, This topic is closed from here on. Appreciate all your sincere comments :)