Congratulations Memorial Day Winners!

  • Rachel RTVW
    14 years ago

    Congratulations! Nice work you three!

    Evocative

    by Melpomene

    You -

    who stood like Night;

    -Reassuring-

    painted exotic black skies
    to cheeks - drunken
    by twilight.

    and he who whispered
    "one should not sleep alone"..

    ran fingertips 'cross -
    unstable lips..
    with breath that felt like
    a thousand lady beetles

    -drifting-

    a flame upon thy neck..

    'tween the verge of
    -dusk and dawn-

    I -

    who stood like shadow;

    conjured his lips -
    to mine.

    As the sound of
    -bittersweet wind chimes-
    devoured sleeping stars;
    in dulcet memories.

    My scintilla -

    - of waking in
    the scent of his arms.

    Everlasting petrichor.

    and he who whispered
    "one should not sleep alone."

    penned susurrous words
    upon my hand;
    that night.

    ^creative with an interesting word choice. A thought provoking piece.

    Breathing Spell

    by EvanescentMoon

    When the pain of loneliness
    and a drunken tongue collide
    beneath the emotional skies
    born...was an unsung child

    ...

    Dead to the world, I took the leap,
    yet on my feet I can never land.
    (Just a sore--only to soar
    a distant past)

    For I have lost
    my life's road map, amongst
    the byways of reality and
    languid petitions of the heart

    Not to realize that happiness
    was just an imaginary path through time.
    A course where untrodden wonders reside
    now far-gone

    ...

    To smell the home fragrance
    of scented caring and nurturing,
    away with the fairies let me be
    oh Father, just for once!

    [There is no revenge so sweet as forgiveness].

    ^Unique expression with a lesson.^

    Temptation

    by Anthony M

    My nemesis calls upon me
    once again as is her custom,
    my mind taken hostage
    and emotions turned loose.

    Though this foe is unwelcome
    I invite her presence nonetheless,
    convinced I can befriend her
    she slyly laughs at my naivete.

    Her ploy unravels slowly at first
    luring me into one more tryst,
    disarmed by the promise of joy
    I succumb to her wicked desires.

    I have become my own prisoner
    yet I hold the key to my freedom,
    but still I give her the power
    to use me, control me, slowly kill me.

    ^This can have many interpretations. It tells a story, many people can relate to this and though a common topic, it isn't cliche.

    Remember to support your fellow poets. Senior members may nominate up to 3 poems per week.

  • Sylvia
    14 years ago

    Congrats to the winners. Good work.

  • Lu
    14 years ago

    Congrats Mel, Myryn & Anthony !!!!

  • Cindy
    14 years ago

    Congrats winners!

  • End Of Eternity
    14 years ago

    Congrats friends :)

  • Jad
    14 years ago

    Congratulations to you three. :]

  • Melpomene
    14 years ago

    Congrats Myryn & Anthony. Lovely reads.

    & thank you all.