Aspiring poet needs assistance

Hello to all,

Not to be a bother to anyone who doesn't have the time...but I would really appreciate it if someone would take a look at my poems. Some were writen long ago, and others more recently. I don't get on here much, but he next time I do I would really like to hear what others have to say about my poetry. My family and friends all like them, but we all know that people we care about will say anything to make you happy.

So, not to be a burden, but it would be appreciated.

Thank you to all who even take the time to read this... and an another thank you to any who leave a comment. :)

I read one of your poems and left a comment with a few minor tips on there. Just something to get you started and try and work on. Atleast all of your rhymes actually rhymed haha I hate when people rhyme random words that have no business being togehter. Best of luck you'll be fine :)