What I'm trying to say is . . .

  • Spirit
    14 years ago

    Ok-
    Let's change this up a bit.
    Instead of writting poems around the title, I want you as poets to write a poem with one of the following 'complete' quotations inserted.
    -You may use multiple quotes in any single poem, and you may enter as many poems as you please. Don't forget to call dibs.
    -No set ending date just yet, but I'll try to give you a week's notice.
    -1st_3 Comments other than submitted poem
    -H.M._1 Comment other than submitted poem
    -All_Your posted poem will be commeted.

    QUOTES:

    -TAKEN-I am not afraid of storms, for I am learning how to sail my ship.[Louisa May Alcott]

    TAKEN--The only way to make a man trustworthy is to trust him.[Henry Stimson]

    -If you wish to reach the highest, begin at the lowest.[Publilius Syrus]

    -Optimism, unaccompanied by personal effort, is merely a state of mind.[Edward L. Curtis]

    -Courage is grace under pressure.[Ernest Hemingway]

    -TAKEN-Never let go of that fiery sadness called desire.[Patti Smith]

    -Beware of trying to accomplish anything by force.[Angela Merici]

    -TAKEN-I'm not funny. What I am is brave.[Lucille Ball]

    -Why not go out on a limb? Isn't that where the fruit is?[Frank Scully]

    -It is always safe to assume that people are more subtle and less sensitive than they seem.[Eric Hoffer]

    -TAKEN-Nothing is more sad than the death of an illusion.[Arthur Koestler]

    -TAKEN-You lose it if you talk about it.[Ernest Hemingway]

    -Though a tree grow ever so high, the falling leaves return to the root.[Malay proverb]

    -Love is the irresistible desire to be desired irresistibly.[Louis Ginsberg]

    -TAKEN-People who throw kisses are hopelessly lazy.[Bob Hope]

    -It is easier to forgive an enemy than a friend.[Madame Dorothee Deluzy]

    -Laws go where dollars please.[Portuguese proverb]

    -Greatness is a road leading towards the unknown.[Charles de Gaulle]

    **P.S. If you choose a quote that is more than one sentence you are allowed to put them into two different parts of the poem.

  • Kimberley
    14 years ago

    -Nothing is more sad than the death of an illusion.[Arthur Koestler]

    Please and thanks :)

  • Sunshine
    14 years ago

    I am not afraid of storms, for I am learning how to sail my ship

    :)

  • Good Enough
    14 years ago

    People who throw kisses are hopelessly lazy.[Bob Hope]
    please :)

  • Sunshine
    14 years ago

    Ok i have finished mine

    >> A Sailor's Spirit

    Amid the stormy ocean, wind keeps straining
    under a low pale sky, that's heavily raining
    where the fear of the water is loudly waning
    away from a shore, that looks like a wet painting

    but

    I am not afraid of storms for I am
    learning how to sail my ship -
    and where danger, keeps wavering
    the roaring of the thunder shall never
    hear me not twice nor once complaining

    and down the oceans deep dim expanse
    like a bold mountain in proud enhance
    my ship will stand,& sail with continuance ..
    Will make from the lightning sweet romance
    and the angry waves shall be my ships dance

    I am not afraid of storms for I am
    learning how to sail my ship
    But as my trip comes to an end
    I shall be the storms best friend

    And the ocean shall be afraid on his tide
    as the sky & its power comes to my side
    bowing to my faith, singing for my grip
    storms shall be afraid, but learn from
    my sailing ship...

    regarding this quote : I am not afraid of storms, for I am learning how to sail my ship.[Louisa May Alcott]

  • Peace And Dinos
    14 years ago

    I would like to try. -I'm not funny. What I am is brave.[Lucille Ball]

  • Lady Nik
    14 years ago

    -Never let go of that fiery sadness called desire.[Patti Smith]

    Please and thank you :]

  • Spirit
    14 years ago

    Plesae post you're poems here. Don't just send me the links.

  • Lemma
    14 years ago

    The only way to make a man trustworthy is to trust him.

    Thanks!

    xXx

  • Sunshine
    14 years ago

    Boo#

  • Spirit
    14 years ago

    Anybody else joining?

  • Lady Nik
    14 years ago

    Lovers

    "Don't forget me,"
    she said just
    loud enough for the
    people in the paintings
    to hear. His only
    response was--
    "could the moon
    forget the sun?"

    He knew he had
    melted himself into
    her heart forever. He
    would never let go of
    the fiery sadness called
    desire and she would
    never love again.

    That was the grief they
    choose to live with. The
    ripping of their souls from
    one passionate kiss.

    Lovers...the lone word
    that explains the completity
    of the world they have been
    sucked into.

  • Kimberley
    14 years ago

    Light In You ~ Kimberley B.

    Colours so vibrant they seem to glow surrounding me,
    Encompassing me within their warm embrace.
    You bring about the sun, the stars, the moon
    To shine down on me and light up my face.
    I draw all the curtains closed so I might see my reflection
    Amidst the jagged shards of light bouncing off of you.
    I train my gaze on your eyes sparkling in this chaos
    But like an illusion you make as apparitions do.
    You seem so close, I can almost touch you, skin to skin.
    I need your warm hand to set the light within me free,
    But when I reach for you the colours fade away
    Into utter darkness that slowly enfolds me.
    I close my eyes for I don't want to see without your colours,
    Because ((nothing is more sad than the death of an illusion.))
    Like trying to catch light in the palm of your hand,
    It's something you can't get over, can't get done.

  • Spirit
    14 years ago

    Thank you.

    FOR ALL OTHER POETS OUT THERE WHO WANT IN ON THIS< THIS IS YOUR TWO WEEK NOTICE.

  • Kimberley
    14 years ago

    -You lose it if you talk about it.[Ernest Hemingway] Can I have this one too? I just got a really good idea for it... :P

  • Peace And Dinos
    14 years ago

    Finally finished it. =D

    What I Am Is Brave

    I'm not funny,
    I hate the way they laugh,
    It makes me feel so worthless,
    And its all on their behalf.

    Just because I'm different,
    And I stick out from the crowd,
    Doesn't mean you should make fun,
    You shouldn't be so proud.

    As I sit here, dreaming,
    Letting all their words get to my head,
    I have an epiphany, redeeming,
    All the thoughts unsaid.

    I can be different and cool,
    True to myself to the tenth,
    If thats what being different is,
    Then you could call it beautiful.

    So laugh all you want Society,
    And Ill still beat to my own drum,
    The only thing I ask you to remember is;

    "I'm not funny,
    What I am is Brave."

    Quote: "I'm not funny. What I am is Brave."-Lucille Ball

  • Kimberley
    14 years ago

    You Lose It If You Talk About It ~Kimberley B.

    You lose it if you talk about it... that's all I know.
    Seal my mouth shut so these words don't slip from my numb lips.
    Bite my tongue because silence seems so much easier
    than retracing my steps to see where I went wrong.
    Somewhere along the way you led me astray
    and now that I'm found
    I don't want to remember being lost.
    Scars remind me that the past is real but words clarify.
    So seal this mouth shut before it says too much.
    Bite my tongue against the words of memory
    and pretend like they aren't haunting me.
    Let's go back to the start; no, no that would be too hard.
    Let's forget it ever happened; if only it were that easy.
    If I put the puzzle pieces together I might fall apart
    because you lose it if you talk about it and I don't want anything to lose.
    So seal my mouth shut and act like I never had anything to say.
    Bite my tongue because it's better that way.
    Tell me your secrets; no, no I can't utter a single word.
    Ask me your questions; the answers are better left unheard.
    Take me back to the start; why, so we can witness my broken heart?
    Let's go back to the start; but that's the hardest part.
    You lose it if you talk about it... that's all I know.
    So rip open this mouth and let the words flow.
    Release my tongue and let the memories go.
    I might fall apart rebuilding the puzzle of my mind
    but I'm tired of running in circles.
    Let's go back to the start; even though it's the hardest part.

    http://kimmberley77.deviantart.com/art/Lose-It-If-You-Talk-About-It-179077756 I actually wrote this with the intentions of it having visuals so just check out the link if you want to see that. :) Anywho that's that.

  • Spirit
    14 years ago

    Hey Guys sorry it took so long to get back.
    I'm in the process of judging, and hopefully I you won't have to wait much longer.

  • Spirit
    14 years ago

    Winner:"Lovers"
    H.M. Will go to everybody else. It was just that hard to pick one.

    Thanks everyone for joining. I should have all comments done before the end of the day.

  • Spirit
    14 years ago

    Double post. Sorry