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If you can't handle constructive criticisim (Sp?) don't bother to post.

SIDENOTE: As I have a three month old son, I am kept busy so I may not get to your poem as quickly as you'd like, but I will get to it when I have the time, just be patient :)

Hey I'd love if you could check out:

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1154412

Anything you want me to look at ?

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1154556

thanks

As a new member to the site and with little knowledge of what makes good poetry, I'd be grateful if you could comment on either of my 2 poems - "The Ivory Towers" or "Sent to her the Key". Note that the "The Ivory Towers" is long so you may want to choose the other one!
Many thanks, and I'm happy to return the favour for one of yours, albeit from a novice's viewpoint! :)

Hi there... just wanted to ask help from you guys... kindly leave some comments or rate my recent poem written specially for my sweetie... i wanted to give this to her as our 3rd monthsary.... we are having long distance relationship and this is the only way i think that will be one of the sweetest thing i can ever do to her... please guys, please rate it... THANK YOU!

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1154661

I'd Love It If You Would Check Out My Poem
"I Smiled Through The Tears"
Thank You!!!:)

Http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1154877

Thanks

Marionette

Thanks

Yesterdays Tomorrow

Thank you.

If you don't mind checking out some lyrics, I'd love for you to do
Chasing the World
http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1154947

if you'd prefer a poem
Be Calm
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1140079

Thanks :)

Http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1154113

thanks a bunch

I would really appreciate it if you read Sorry for me being me. thank you

Home is where the heart is...

I would appreciate If you could read Pouring Raine or Look through their eyes and see what they know.

Whichever title intrests you more:)

Thank you

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1152491

Thank you in advance, Joe

Just letting you all know that I haven't forgotten about this, just been super busy. I'm baby free this weekend so I will get to all of these tomorrow, thank you all for your patience!

5 more people and then I will close this.

Could you please look at 'Deaths Anomaly' your opinion would be extremely appreciated!
Thank you so very much in advance =)

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1114266

Done. have you found her please