Do one of myn and i'll do at rrc at least 2 of yours

  • XxFallenxFromxGracexX
    14 years ago

    Heyyy i havent written in ages, but i just wrote this new poem "Hide and Seek Nightmare"

    it was for one of the contests on here about the worst nightmare you've had.

    I'd love it if some people could have a look at it and let me know what they think, its a little confusing but then nightmares usually are haha so its meant to be

    =]

    thanks

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  • Maverick
    14 years ago

    That was a very good depiction of how a nightmare can feel, blended together with the narration of events. Great job.

    Can you look at My Orange Bottles and Words From A Betrayed Man please and thank youu

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  • XxFallenxFromxGracexX
    14 years ago

    Thanks nick, all done =]

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  • Jess
    14 years ago

    I Commented Itt:)
    Will You Please Comment My Poem "I Smiled Through The Tears" And Whatever Else:)

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  • XxFallenxFromxGracexX
    14 years ago

    All done =]

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  • XxFallenxFromxGracexX
    14 years ago

    Great poems! =] and thanks for your suggestions i completely agree with them

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  • Lady Nik
    14 years ago

    All done :]

    Can you please do
    The Leaves of Winter
    and
    Hey Moon

    Please and thank you
    Nik

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  • XxFallenxFromxGracexX
    14 years ago

    Done, great poems Nik =]

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  • TowerDreamer
    14 years ago

    Have added a comment to your excellent poem.

    I've only got 2 poems and one is quite long, so if you only want to comment on the short one that'll will be fine. Thanks

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  • Michael D Nalley
    14 years ago

    Well done

    please do Pieces of a poet's mind

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  • XxFallenxFromxGracexX
    14 years ago

    Done great poems =]

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  • kelleyana
    14 years ago

    Done.

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  • dollwithafrown
    14 years ago

    Done. :)

    If you could please do "Worms and Wasps" and "Uncle", thank you.

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  • XxFallenxFromxGracexX
    14 years ago

    Done guys, great poems =]

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  • XxFallenxFromxGracexX
    14 years ago

    Hey guys im closing this down now, really busy at the moment so i dont got time to comment heaps right now.

    Thanks to everyone who read my poem =]

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