i cant seem to write though i wanna

  • Lostraindrops
    19 years ago

    hey im a good writer and all but im havin trouble writing a poem to my friend. I wrote it out in a paragraph saying

    "I've been doing some thinking. This may sound a little akward but I'm sorry I know your right. I guess I haven't been using my head so greatly these past few weeks. I'm happy to finally know I actually have someone who will give me helpful advice and a shoulder to cry on. When I need it. I guess we can thank those summer night chats with out those I guess we really wouldn't have all those memories and inside jokes made.
    Thanks for being there for me"

    I know if I work for hours I can get it but I can't seem to get it out. Can someone write a poem for me? or should I just leave it as it is and explain that in a paragraph form and not make any changes. I'm not sure what to do... thanks for helping if you do.

    (P.S. he writes as well)

  • Lipton
    19 years ago

    Well, maybe you have writer's block. Common illness in writers. Don't worry, it will pass. Maybe, if you get more ideas, instead of just limiting yourself to this one paragraph, then it would be easier. Just a suggestion.

    ~Ciao Lipton

  • Lostraindrops
    19 years ago

    yeah i know i get it all the time...thx

  • Lostraindrops
    19 years ago

    im havin trouble alright leave me alone..if u dont like it then dont answer!

    "end of story, period, finished, that's it."

    P.S. why must u be so negative over everyones poems

    "cheers"

  • Lostraindrops
    19 years ago

    HAHA HA HA!! yeah right i can write when i want..what i want...and how i write and no one can tell me what to, went to or how to frickin write...its my life dont tell me how to control it!

  • Lostraindrops
    19 years ago

    yeah because i got writer's block...i knew what i wanted to right i just couldnt get the words out so shut up....who asked you in the 1st place

  • Eibutsina
    19 years ago

    To me personally what you have written in that paragraph is a form of poetry, its your expression and thanks to a friend regardless of his writing talent he will know its heartfelt and appreciate it greatly!

  • Lostraindrops
    19 years ago

    stop acting like a smartass alright...just cuz i post it public doesnt mean u gotta answer

    =Eirisa=
    thx i guess ur right.

  • -
    19 years ago


    just take some of the sentences that mean the most to you from your paragraph and space them out..then add a few lines around them to make your verses...i don't know if this will help, but i hope so. have a kewl day, l8ter!

    p.s. justplainme (or WATEVR) doesn't have to be such a b(4 more stars)...this is supposed to be a positive poetry environment focused on helping and supporting your fellow poetry writers, NOT bringing them down and encouraging them not to write. plus "writer's block" isn't some excuse for "fake" writers. it happens. just cause you may not want to admit it doesn't matter. so do all the rest of us a favor and get over yourself!

  • Lostraindrops
    19 years ago

    yay!!! thats what i was trying to tell him or whatever....hehe thxx

  • Kaitlin Kristina
    19 years ago

    JPM: You need to hold people up to the standards that they can reach, instead of getting continually disappointed because they don’t have enough talent.

  • Bret Higgins
    19 years ago

    Ahh, but that's what defines JPM as the one they love to hate.

  • Lostraindrops
    19 years ago

    yes finally someone who agrees with me on the idiotic face JPM is!!

  • Kaitlin Kristina
    19 years ago

    I agree with Bret. JPM is tragically misunderstood by far too many, but its just mildly constructive.

  • Lostraindrops
    19 years ago

    haha