New Poem: "In Memory of Daydreams" [1 for 1]

Hi,

Well, it's been a really long time since I've written anything, so I decided to post the first thing that popped into my head. Normally I'm really judgemental on my own poetry, but this once seemed to past the tests. I guess it's one of the reason I haven't posted or written in a while.

Anyways, if you can, please read and comment on my poem "In Memory of Daydreams". For those of you that do, I will read one of your poems. I know, it's only one, but I've been really busy. I may get another one done if I have time.

Only post here if you have a specific request. All comments will be returned.

Done. have you found her please