For a lost lovd one

I wrote a poem for a friend that has always been there for me, she recently lost her mom and her grandma, i was hoping to get some feedback befoe i gave it to her, could you please read "angel wings" and let me know what u think before i give it to her??

Thank you! it helped so much, i changed a few things, including the ending, not sure if the ending is any better... i hope so!!