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  • The Prince
    13 years ago

    Okay, so the rules of the fourth round of my contest state that it will be the members of P&Q who decide the fate of these four poets. I am going to post 4 haiku chains about each of the seasons below and you have 24 hours from 16:00 British time to get me a good and varied collection of results/comments.

    I would like each of you to award 4 points to what you think is the best, 3 to the second best, 2 to the third and 1 to what you consider the 'worst' poem. And please state your reasons why. You can be as brief or as detailed as you like.

    I want to, again thank every participant for getting their fantastic poems in with time left over. I received them in an appropriate order too! ;)

    Poem 1: Autumn/fall
    Poem 2: Winter
    Poem 3: Spring
    Poem 4: Summer

    --

    1) Fall of Dusk
    Faint forests ablaze
    dripping blood, red and yellow
    betrayed by Summer

    Silent silhouette
    reflects a dying promise
    to return next year

    Abandoned, by warmth
    Autumn dusk brings certain death
    and lifeless they fall

    --

    2) Winter-down
    A leaf curls like ash
    wafting downward dry and grey,
    tight like a dead hand.

    The fallow earth mourns
    beneath the gauzy snowfall-
    still the cleanest shroud.

    A spare ghost of green:
    smothered under frozen soil
    seeds quicken and wake.

    --

    3) Spring View
    I
    vibrant skin of earth
    blushing 'neath the perfumed sky -
    roses on the bloom

    II
    folks in high spirits
    off over the field with grin -
    soft rain falls gently

    III
    a frog taking break
    sits atop a mountain peak -
    bench with mirror pond

    --

    4) Leisure
    silk orange ribbons
    secrets hidden in seashells
    sea maiden's cracked lips

    a water-cooled shade
    sinking in coconut shells
    islands still unborn

    quaking butterflies
    birds rise in fluttery clouds
    towards winking sun.

    -----------------------------

  • The Prince
    13 years ago

    I was gonna say post them here, but Nana's already messaged me them so you might aswell inbox me them =P

  • Sunshine
    13 years ago

    Aww Sorry :/

    if you want I will post them over here..

  • Courageous Dreamer
    13 years ago

    It's been well over 24 hours?

  • The Prince
    13 years ago

    I haven't had a chance to be online on my laptop for ages. I'll post results when I can. I've only had like...3 people get back to me too :/ more wouldve been appreciated!

  • sibyllene
    13 years ago

    It might be a bit late, but maybe if people posted in here, it would get things moving a bit more?

  • Courageous Dreamer
    13 years ago

    Wouldn't that start a controversy again? It'd probably influence people's votes, sadly.

  • sibyllene
    13 years ago

    Most likely. Someone farts and it starts a controversy around here.

  • sibyllene
    13 years ago

    I do what I can to promote literacy.

  • Ingrid
    13 years ago

    If you want me to give comments in this thread, I am willing to, Danny. I can see a real winner amongst the entries.

  • Courageous Dreamer
    13 years ago

    I'd agree. I'd just post what you have unless there are ties. It'd be nice to keep this contest going so the next can start.

  • The Prince
    13 years ago

    I need a fourth to break a tie! :) still no laptop btw, will post results in the morning if I get a volunteer

  • silvershoes
    13 years ago

    I sent ya some scores and comments. Sorry you didn't get more.

  • silvershoes
    13 years ago

    HAHAHA!

  • The Prince
    13 years ago

    Thanks to ya both!! (: