Poetry Game 2

- Name : Broken Hearted Immortal
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- Joined : Feb 15, 2005
- Posts : 534
Broken Hearted Immortal
19 years ago

try to keep it ryming wit the last word of a sentence.
(dont make it ryme wit the same word)

when the love of my life left to day,
he didnt even give me a chance to say,

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- Name : Eibutsina
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- Joined : Jun 22, 2004
- Posts : 3058
Eibutsina
19 years ago

That hurting him was far from my intentions
Im apologising sincerely for my heartless deceptions...

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- Name : Ashleigh Skye
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- Joined : Jun 29, 2004
- Posts : 2102
Ashleigh Skye
19 years ago

How could I have not seen,
that to him I was a queen.

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- Name : Broken Hearted Immortal
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Broken Hearted Immortal
19 years ago

but he just wouldnt believe,
instead he chose to leave,

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- Name : Emily
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- Joined : Jan 24, 2005
- Posts : 25
Emily
19 years ago

Why he chose to die.
I don't know why.

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- Name : Broken Hearted Immortal
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Broken Hearted Immortal
19 years ago

but when he died,
i fell apart and cried,

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- Name : Tiny Reader
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Dec 26, 2004
- Posts : 459
Tiny Reader
19 years ago

my hearts now broken,
feelings left unspoken,

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- Name : Broken Hearted Immortal
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Broken Hearted Immortal
19 years ago

left on the shelf,
by my little elf,

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- Name : Elyssa
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- Joined : Feb 10, 2005
- Posts : 54
Elyssa
19 years ago

I keeping my feelings for him
how could I have been so dim?

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- Name : Broken Hearted Immortal
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Broken Hearted Immortal
19 years ago

no one really knows,
what he will soon show,

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- Name : Broken Hearted Immortal
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Broken Hearted Immortal
19 years ago

he never did take,
his slice of the cake,

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- Name : *~*Soldier Lover*~*
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- Joined : Jan 28, 2005
- Posts : 274
*~*Soldier Lover*~*
19 years ago

everything I did was real,
he's the only one that could make me feel,

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- Name : Broken Hearted Immortal
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- Posts : 534
Broken Hearted Immortal
19 years ago

this very way,
even to this day,

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- Name : Broken Hearted Immortal
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- Posts : 534
Broken Hearted Immortal
19 years ago

i pray that he is alright,
and not in another fight,

and yea rohit it was appropiate

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- Name : Broken Hearted Immortal
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Broken Hearted Immortal
19 years ago

no matter what he will do,
i know we will make it through,

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- Name : Broken Hearted Immortal
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- Posts : 534
Broken Hearted Immortal
19 years ago

but if its too late,
and we happen to miss out date,
its ok well just take,
our piece of cake.

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- Name : CinnamonTwirl
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- Joined : Dec 18, 2004
- Posts : 97
CinnamonTwirl
19 years ago

But I will always keep hope
And with this I'll try to cope

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- Name : Broken Hearted Immortal
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- Posts : 534
Broken Hearted Immortal
19 years ago

when i say to him that i love him,
does he believe me or will he up and leave me?

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- Name : Broken Hearted Immortal
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Broken Hearted Immortal
19 years ago

he made me cry,
now i want to die,

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- Name : Broken Hearted Immortal
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Broken Hearted Immortal
19 years ago

when i sigh i remember when you told me,
that you never wanted me to cry.

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- Name : Seronum
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- Joined : Sep 18, 2004
- Posts : 325
Seronum
19 years ago

I silently sat beside your peaceful corpse and kissed you softly on your forehead.

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- Name : cac123
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- Joined : Jan 13, 2005
- Posts : 102
cac123
19 years ago

Smiling memories,
of you and me,
but now hes gone,
maybe if i could have seen...

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Name : Seronum
Status : Senior Member
Joined : Sep 18, 2004
Posts : 325

Seronum
19 years ago

If i could have seen him one last time that way this poem would rhyme. Please dont blame my disgust, my emotions have turned to rust. And now Im living alone, drunk and disoriented while talking to the shadow of my own.

- Name : Christina Gomes
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- Joined : Dec 11, 2004
- Posts : 180
Christina Gomes
19 years ago

I cried for hours
Alone with a broken heart
You didn't care for my misery
You didn't play your part

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- Name : Natalie84
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- Joined : Oct 11, 2004
- Posts : 7422
Natalie84
19 years ago

I'm so alone
And don't know what to do
How can I live
When all I think about is you

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- Name : xxangelchicxx2000
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- Joined : Feb 3, 2005
- Posts : 169
xxangelchicxx2000
19 years ago

i am wide awake
now feeling the pain
there is nothing i can do
except to remember you

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- Name : Christina Gomes
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- Joined : Dec 11, 2004
- Posts : 180
Christina Gomes
19 years ago

i try to forget the hurt
and the pain you caused me
trying to convince myself it didn't happen
because it just couldn't be

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Name : Seronum
Status : Senior Member
Joined : Sep 18, 2004
Posts : 325

Seronum
19 years ago

Our love together was the best, and now youv left me with the rest. I should put you to the test and make you confess so our love will be success. Unless your a mess and youv caused me such stress with the lies of your best.

- Name : Broken Hearted Immortal
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- Posts : 534
Broken Hearted Immortal
19 years ago

with all this togetherness,
i think we can get out of this mess,

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- Name : katie!
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- Joined : Oct 12, 2004
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katie!
19 years ago

And happiness we can once again take
Along with that lovely piece of cake

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- Name : cac123
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- Posts : 102
cac123
19 years ago

Loving him was a beatiful disaster,
he was taken away, with tears falling after,

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- Name : katie!
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- Posts : 2255
katie!
19 years ago

blood sliding down his face like tears
Confirming all of your worst fears
Hit by a car which took his life
Should you go and take the knife

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Name : Broken Hearted Immortal
Status : Regular Member
Joined : Feb 15, 2005
Posts : 534

Broken Hearted Immortal
19 years ago

CAKE CAKE CAKE CAKE CAKE CAKE CAKE CAKE CAKE i used the word cake oopsy noone cares.

thanks for playing but obviously some people are obsesed wit other people saying the word cake!!!!!!!

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